dissabte, 11 de maig del 2013

My English competence in 2013

NOTE: I know the title should be "My English competence in 2012", but I think it's a mistake ._.

Well, it's easy to choose what is my best writing. Due to the continuous and great improvement I made while writing in English, I think my last composition, "Discussion: Prenup' arrangements are a good idea?", is the perfect example of my evolution. It shows that I improved a lot in my expression, grammar and vocabulary, making my compositions understandable and less childish. Also, it's a good example of well-structured writing.

I said this before, but I think that my compositions seem to be better due to the use of connectors, which  provide texts comprehension and fluency.

"Discussion: Prenup' arrangements are a good idea?": http://firstbtxblog.blogspot.com.es/2013/05/discussion-prenup-arrangements-are-good.html

Talking about my orals, I have to say that all my oral presentations don't seem "adequate" for me because of nervousness, so I chose my "less-nervous" podcast, "Short joke". I'll keep thinking that I have to improve at orals; my pronunciation is awful sometimes.

"Short joke": http://firstbtxblog.blogspot.com.es/2012/11/podcast-short-joke.html

There aren't any personal reasons to choose them... But if I have to choose a writing and an oral project that have a meaning for me, I would choose "What is best, to be thin or chubby?" for a composition, and "Bullying" and "Ikebana" for orals. These 3 projects show (more or less) what kind of person I am in essence, so I remember them in a especial way (even if they're not my best works, talking objectively).

"Opinion: What is best, to be thin or chubby?"http://firstbtxblog.blogspot.com.es/2011/10/opinion-what-is-best-being-thin-or.html
"Oral presentation: Ikebana":
"Oral presentation: Bullying": http://firstbtxblog.blogspot.com.es/2012/06/oral-presentation-bullying.html

My English progress from 2011-2013

Comparing my first composition, "Presentation mail", and the last one, "Discussion: prenup' arrangements are a good idea?", I see I improved a lot expressing myself in English, although there's a lot of things that I don't master yet. My vocabulary, grammar and comprehension is widely improved now, specially linking words; I didn't know how to use them when I wrote the letter. Additionally, I can see I changed as a person, so it greatly affects my compositions: I express myself more directly and I try to be more logic than before, even if I can't do that sometimes.

My last composition: http://firstbtxblog.blogspot.com.es/2013/05/discussion-prenup-arrangements-are-good.html

Talking about my first and last oral presentations ("Ikebana" and "My research paper"), I think that I didn't improve very much on pronunciation and fluency... But I improved in language, related to my writing improvement. Maybe I'm too nervous in front of people... There isn't much to comment about this, because there's only two changes between the first and the last oral presentation: vocabulary and grammar.


As a conclusion, I have to say that I see a great improvement on writing skills, while I keep being kinda nervous in front of people (the main characteristic of oral presentations is that you have to talk directly to people, and that didn't improve).

Discussion: "Prenup' arrangements are a good idea?"

Due to the recent increase of prenuptial arrangements, people sometimes tend to think about it, like all new stuff that go against old values.

On one hand, the arrangement finishes off all the romantic atmosphere that usually leads to a marriage. No one can deny that when you are in love with someone you feel a lot of sensations, nullified by "burocracy" in arrangements.

But on the other hand, as a result of an arranged marriage, you can live with a balance, making easy to control your life; furthermore, that arrangement can help you whereas a marriage with a loved person can turn you into an slave.

In other words, it's up to everybody to choose between the strong love feelings that lead to a marriage or the balance that an arranged one provides, Of course, I'm talking about common things: it's obviously possible to fall in love even after having married by an arrangement.

Fictional formal letter to Mr. Rajoy

I.d.k. Street, nº 18
91648, London
11th May, 2013 
Hypocrite Street, nº 16
18972, Spain


Dear Mr. Rajoy;

I am writing to you in order to express my opinion - I am just an ordinary citizen - about the problems my generation faces because of your "argueable adequate" politics.

Besides the massive discouragement of young people about politicians, there is the belief that some day the country's situation will change thanks to a better management. In spite of being that optimistic, I think that your way of dealing with society's problems increases them in fact. It smashes people rights even if they spend their whole lives working and trying to be happier. Your politics focus on privatizing and cutting worker's rights, in order to fix a great problem. I see this as complete nonsense, as if people can not buy, sellers can not sell, and trading gets stuck, dumping the welfare state.

So, in order to make this situation suitable for almost everyone, I would like to suggest to change the country's organization model to a federal one: there is too much administrative employers earning an incredible amount of money per month, while ordinary people get less than a half of it, making the model unsustainable.

I look forward to hearing from you.


Yours sincerely,

Luchi

SAO (Sword Art Online)

Sword Art Online, also known as "SAO", is an animated Japanese series. The story is developed between the real world and the digital world, where various games take place; SAO, the first massive multiplayer online role playable game where players can play introducing their consciousness in the game (virtual reality), is one of them. When the game came out, 10000 players bought all the unities of the game, and started the game. It begins like a normal game, but all turns suspicious when players can't disconnect. Then, the player creator, Akayaba Akihiko, informed them that they won't be able to abandon the game until they complete the 100 floors of Aincrad, the great castle where they are in.

What's more... If they die in the game, they will die in the real world too. Like this, the game of the death begin. Kazuto Kirigaya, a boy who played the beta of the game, decided to complete the game alone.


What to say? It's such a wonderful story! It has a lot of references about self-overcoming, and also it has a lot of emotional parts. I strongly recommend it for all kinds of people, but specially for teenagers that like some action with love.


Image source: http://blogs.gamefilia.com/files/imce/u500479/53473-sword-art-online-sao_0.jpg

Allegories: a great project?

I was wondering about what I can do to entertain myself and also express my opinions or doubts about the world. Through some talks on psychology class, I've decided to make use of Youtube for this. But then, I realized that I didn't have any idea of what kind of videos I'm going to do.

So, various ideas came to my mind: what about origami? What about original creations with pc, like animated little films or something? What about some "rhythms" with my synthesizer? Well, that wasn't going to help me with my previous objectives, but still I was going to have some fun, so I decided to carry on.

Finally, I had an idea, from all those videos that draw something explaining that: I can do "allegories"! I can draw something metaphoric, that can make you think, or at least have a visible meaning. It can help me to improve my drawings, which are completely awful.

I post here my channel; sometimes I will put there some things to entertain everybody -^^-


URL: http://www.youtube.com/channel/UCggPOYC-Cwb-kovPo04dWmQ

Phoenix - "Lasso"


Where would you go? Not long ago // On aniràs? No fa tantI've been thinking out loud why so suddenly? // He estat pensant en veu alta "per què tant de sobte?"Don't you know? Don't do it // No ho saps? No ho fagisWhat you do, oh what you do to me  // Què fas, oh que em fas

Forever is a long, long time when you've lost your way // Sempre és molt molt de temps quan has perdut el teu camí (*quan no saps què fer ja)Trying to follow your ideal // Intentant seguir el teu idealOh sorry but your so called life it is such a waste // Oh ho sento però el que tu anomenes vida és una pèrdua (*de temps)

Wear your real eyes // Vesteix-te amb els teus ulls realsNo, you don't realize // No, no et dones compteWhat you say yes to // Al que dius que síBut you say yes to // Però ho dius de tota manera

Where would you go // On aniràsWhere would you go with a lasso? // On aniràs amb un llaç?Could you run into, could you run into // Pots "entrar-li" a, pots "entrar-li" a Could you go and run into me? // Pots anar i "entrar-me"?

Where would you go // On aniràsWhere would you go tied up to a lasso? // On aniràs lligat amb un llaç?Could you run into, could you run into // Pots "entrar-li" a, pots "entrar-li" a Could you go and run into me? // Pots anar i "entrar-me"?

So lonely, so pretty such a lack of diplomacy // Tan sol, tan bell però amb falta de diplomaciaYou can't get out // No pots sortir-neDon't you know, don't do it // No ho saps, no ho fagisWhat you do, well you should do to me // Què fas, bé hauries de fer-m'ho

Far out, so far out, such a fallout // Lluny, tan lluny, semblant pols radiactiu (?)Not only that you're lonely // No només que estàs solDon't matter if you're not so well // No importa si no estàs béNo, you're not so well // No, tu no estàs bé
Where would you go // On aniràsWhere would you go with a lasso? // On aniràs amb un llaç?Could you run into, could you run into // Pots "entrar-li" a, pots "entrar-li" a Could you go and run into me? // Pots anar i "entrar-me"?

Where would you go // On aniràsWhere would you go tied up to a lasso? // On aniràs lligat amb un llaç?Could you run into, could you run into // Pots "entrar-li" a, pots "entrar-li" a Could you go and run into me? // Pots anar i "entrar-me"?
Wear your real eyes // Vesteix-te amb els teus ulls realsNo, you don't realize // No, no et dones compteWhat you say yes to // Al que dius que síBut you say yes to // Però ho dius de tota manera

Forever is a long, long time when you've lost your way // Sempre és molt molt de temps quan has perdut el teu camí (*quan no saps què fer ja)Forever is a long, long time when you've lost your way // Sempre és molt molt de temps quan has perdut el teu camí (*quan no saps què fer ja)

NOTE: The format went mad -.- I can't fix iiiiiit!